Saturday, September 8, 2012

Chapter Three, Part One- Cinderheart POV


Cinderheart stared at Hazeltail’s tail as the queen exited the nursery. Cinderheart knew what that meant- she had to look after Larchkit and Smokykit. It was an assigned job that she and Hazeltail confirmed almost as soon as Cinderheart moved into the den. Icecloud was now too close to having her own kits to look after them. If she was left alone in the den with the kits and Jayfeather was out, what would happen? Briarlight only just became his apprentice, a bit after Hazeltail delivered. She didn’t have much experience.
            The gray she-cat watched the two little toms tumble and play, and Cinderheart smiled. Looking down at her rounded belly, her smile grew wider. She and Lionblaze finally were having kits! She thought she felt three inside her, as sometimes they kicked. In any of her free time when Larchkit and Smokykit weren’t causing mischief, Cinderheart kicked back and thought of names. For she-kits… how about Honeykit or Fernkit after Honeyfern and Ferncloud? As for toms… Pinekit, Sunkit, after former leaders… I like Lakekit too.
            “Hey!” a high-pitched voice exclaimed, jerking Cinderheart out of her thoughts. Icecloud was glaring grumpily at Larchkit and Smokykit, who were pretending her ears were the great mountains.
            “I’m so sorry!” Cinderheart cried, and she shuffled over and dragged Hazeltail’s sons off of the queen. Icecloud was losing lots of patience as she came closer to giving birth. Cinderheart’s fur pricked at the thought of the white queen going into labor now.
            Just then, Cinderheart heard a sob outside. She poked her head out of the nursery, wrapping her tail around Larchkit and Smokykit firmly.
            Sorreltail’s body was convulsing and shuddering, and Brackenfur was holding back a fresh wave of sadness. Lilypaw and Poppyfrost stood next to them, moist-eyed themselves. Cinderheart felt a sharp pang of agitation. Seedpaw, who wandered off a few sunrises ago, still hadn’t been found. Every day Sorreltail, who was Cinderheart’s mother as well, sadly trudged around the camp with her mate, Brackenfur, comforting her with every stride.
            The past hit Cinderheart hard, and she whipped around to look back into the nursery again. Besides the huge Icecloud resting in the corner of the den, not much had changed from when she remembered the nursery being when Cinderheart was a kit. She’d play with Poppykit, Molekit, and Honeykit excitedly, and each new day brought more fun. Sorreltail and Brackenfur were young, happy; there was no Lionblaze yet, no Power of Three prophecy. Yet still, for some reason, cats stared at her strangely. Later Cinderheart learned that the Clan’s medicine cat, Cinderpelt, died during her birth in this very nursery during a badger attack, back when the Clans were still new to the lake.
            Cinderpelt had a crippled leg which never healed; Cinderheart broke her leg, too, as an apprentice like Cinderpelt did. The bones in Cinderheart’s leg mended back together.
            She snapped back to current times when Larchkit tapped her paw with his tail. “Um, gray cat?” he quizzed, staring up at Cinderheart with round blue eyes.
            Cinderheart’s heart broke into pieces. He was so adorable! “Yes, Larchkit? And my name is Cinderheart.”
            Larchkit glanced at Smokykit, and the two brothers shrugged. Then Larchkit continued, “Whatever. Anyway, I was wondering who that fat piece of fox dung is over there.” He motioned to Icecloud in the corner.
            The gray queen gulped. Were kits really that disrespectful? Maybe it’s just a phase, or rude young toms. Cinderheart blinked and answered, “She is called Icecloud. Icecloud is your father’s sister, and soon she will have more playmates for you guys. So will I.”
            Smokykit growled. “What you just said didn’t make any sense at all. That ugly white thing isn’t related to Foxleap. That’s just impossible. And how can she produce more cuties like us? We’re awesome, plus we’re satisfied with just having each other as ‘playmates’.”
            “How dopey,” Larchkit muttered.
            I thought they were cute, innocent little ones. How wrong I was. “I can’t believe you two would be like that towards a cat in a higher position than you. Your parents will hear about this!”
            Instantly Smokykit and his littermate went into hiding, delving into Hazeltail’s nest. They are related to Berrynose, right?
            Desperately Cinderheart wanted to leave the nursery for a bit and stretch her legs. It was hot and stuffy in there, especially with Icecloud puffing warm air with each breath. Cinderheart couldn’t even stand up straight without her back smacking the bramble wall. A rumbling started up in her throat, but she resisted allowing it to last. Surely Hazeltail wouldn’t escape the horrors of her troublesome offspring for a purposely long time?
            Finally Hazeltail returned, and Cinderheart woke up from her nap happily. “Hazeltail,” she meowed, and the gray-and-white she-cat faced her. Cinderheart noticed the dark circles under the queen’s eyes and suddenly felt even worse than before. The pain in her stomach as increasing. Were kits this much work?
            “What?” Hazeltail snapped, not bothering to apologize for her snippy attitude. Cinderheart couldn’t blame her. Larchkit and Smokykit were disasters that already happened. Would Cinderheart’s unborn sons and daughters be disasters waiting to happen?
            “I’m sorry if I’m bothering you, but… I just wanted to say that Larchkit and Smokykit have been…” Cinderheart hesitated when she saw two little forms trembling behind Hazeltail’s moss.
            Hazeltail glared. “What are the menaces doing now?” She plopped down into her nest, making a blockade before her sons. Not seeing them shake made Cinderheart feel more confident.
            “They’vebeentreatingmeandIcecloudlikedirt.” With that Cinderheart raced out of the den, the excess weight she gained slowing her down a bit. Panting laboriously, she skidded across the clearing and threw herself down before the fresh-kill pile. She needed to eat.
            Behind her, Cinderheart picked up the sound of paws trotting cheerfully against the earth. She swallowed hard and closed her eyes tightly. Hazeltail would definitely kill her now.
            “Guess who!” a voice said teasingly, and a golden tail swept before Cinderheart’s eyes, making her temporarily blind.
            “Oh, Lionblaze!” Cinderheart chortled and glanced up at her handsome mate. She was so lucky to finally have him. He was her only true love, the only one she’d ever love.
            He collapsed down beside her in a sticky heap. “I would suggest that you don’t touch me,” he mewed, and Cinderheart jerked her muzzle away from his.
            “Why?”
            “I just came back from a patrol, and I ran into a huge cobweb. Now if Jayfeather’s looking for some cobwebs, he can just pick them off of me.” Lionblaze ducked his head in mock shame, as a grin still sat on his face.
            Cinderheart laughed a deep, hearty laugh and snatched a squirrel from the dangerously low pile of deceased prey. Then she froze. “Have the beauties and Graystripe eaten yet?” The warrior code’s harsh rules loomed before her.
            “I suppose so,” Lionblaze answered. “Graystripe isn’t complaining that he’s hungry, and the kits aren’t out trying to steal something. Anyway, you’re an expecting queen. You need to get nutrition not just for you but for our kits as well.” He purred as she dug in like a member of BloodClan. “Why did you call Larchkit and Smokykit the beauties?”
            “They treat me like mouse bile, for one thing,” Cinderheart started, talking between chews. “They called Icecloud a ‘fat white thing’, and there’s more. Hazeltail doesn’t seem to care. At all. I had to retreat from the nursery, Lionblaze. I’m freaking out.”
            Lionblaze frowned. “Wow. I’ve never known any kits that act like that. Do you want me to report to Bramblestar? All youngsters need to treat their older ones with respect.” Cinderheart detected some sarcasm in his tone.
            She shook her head no. “It’s not worth it. We’d just be causing even more chaos.” Cinderheart finished the rest of her squirrel and signed in contentment. “That was delicious.”
            “Is there anything I can do?” Lionblaze offered, finally sounding serious.
            “I want to get out of camp for a bit. Want to take a walk with me?”
            Cinderheart’s mate paused. “What if you go into labor outside of camp?”
            The gray warrior snorted. “I’m not that far along. Trust me; I’ll get much bigger before that happens.”

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